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Come forth, all with senses.

See the magnificence of his comeuppance;
Hear the voice of merciless preaching;
Smell the incense of glory be to the Highest;
Feel the trembling of fear that oppose him;
Taste the bitter sweetness of those who shall fall;

Come forth and believe in my brother
Just as the Lord believes in him.
Title: "Simply Poetic: The Chronicles of the Mercier Brothers | First Entry"
Writer: Me! :iconmadxrhapsodyx17:
Character Writer: Elijah Mercier
Genres: Spiritual, Inspiring and Uplifting, Strength
Inspiration: Isaiah Mercier | The Book of Isaiah 1x2: Brush the Dust! (BWF)

First Entry ~~> [link]
Third Entry ~~> [link]
Fourth Entry ~~> [link]

This is a little more of a deeper incentive for the Mercier Brothers. I'm attempting to write a different style so that it's more tuned to Elijah's own. Give it a life of its own, y'know? This piece utilizes the five basic human senses. More and more am I growing fonder of these characters. I can't wait to unravel the next part of their story. :heart:

Feedback is most certainly welcome. Enjoy! :)


The Mercier Brothers (c) Me.
This poem and the writing (c) Me.

Please do not use without my permission.
Delice1941 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Elijah is seeing, I believe, the glory of his brother Isaiah.

Come forth and believe in my brother
Just as the Lord believes in him........ your intentions are made clear in these few lines:rose:
MadxRhapsodyx17 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student Writer
Elijah deeply admires his older brother. He does anything that he can to make him shine. :heart:

Thanks for the love! :glomp:
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